User contributions for Beatlesrhys
A user with 110 edits. Account created on 20 March 2023.
3 June 2024
- 03:3403:34, 3 June 2024 diff hist +4 Al-Fashir →Economy: Added link to United Nations Wikipedia page. Tag: Visual edit
31 May 2024
- 06:2806:28, 31 May 2024 diff hist −4 John L. Jackson Jr. →Career: Removed errant "and" left from previous edits. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:2606:26, 31 May 2024 diff hist +237 Richard Alden →Later career: Added source to statement. Edited sentence to make statement a single sentence. Revised writing for encyclopedic tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
14 May 2024
- 05:5405:54, 14 May 2024 diff hist −190 Puzzle Mountain (Maine) →Trail Tips and Amenities: Removal of a sentence written in a promotional voice, which contributed no encyclopedic information to the page. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:5503:55, 14 May 2024 diff hist −10 Draft:Bhai Jai Singh Khalkat →Death: Added link to Ambala wikipedia page, corrected grammatical structure. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
- 03:5003:50, 14 May 2024 diff hist −8 Sindoh →3D printers: Combined sentences for better readability. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:4503:45, 14 May 2024 diff hist +39 Institute for Women's Leadership at Rutgers University Added link to Rutgers University-New Brunswick wikipedia page. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:4303:43, 14 May 2024 diff hist +4 Kleinheubach →Coat of arms: Added link to Johann Dientzenhofer wikipedia page. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
9 May 2024
- 01:0701:07, 9 May 2024 diff hist −5 Smart Agent Technologies →History: Corrected grammar from "has been" to "was". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
24 April 2024
- 07:2807:28, 24 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Winifred Akpani Removed unnecessary "a". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:2407:24, 24 April 2024 diff hist −33 Tata Ace Simplified beginning sentence of paragraph to highlight topic. Moved specific product details to next sentence. Removed promotional language. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:1007:10, 24 April 2024 diff hist +8 Charlotte York →Sex and the City film: Replaced repeated uses of major noun with pronoun. Edited second half of sentence for clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:0407:04, 24 April 2024 diff hist −18 m Islamic Azad University, West Tehran Branch →Faculties: The term "cultural affairs" was written twice. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
1 April 2024
- 06:4706:47, 1 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Foundation for Africa →Activities in Hungary: Removed "the" from sentence to correct grammar. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
- 06:4306:43, 1 April 2024 diff hist +13 m Feminism in South Korea →Collapse of feminism in Korea: Corrected grammar and changed instances of "man-hating" to "misandrist", linking to Wikipedia page on the subject. Tag: Visual edit
9 August 2023
- 05:2305:23, 9 August 2023 diff hist +368 St. Marks National Wildlife Refuge Added citation to claim and shortened sentence to fit encyclopedic tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
1 August 2023
- 03:5303:53, 1 August 2023 diff hist +16 Honda →Corporate profile and divisions: Removed reference to Coronavirus pandemic, event occurring after cited source's publication, not mentioned in source. Rewrote uncommon "triple disaster" reference to "2011 Tohoku earthquake and tsunami" to be more clearly understood. Cited source also refers only to these two natural disasters as having an effect on UK production, with no mention of subsequent Fukushima nuclear disaster. Tag: Visual edit
27 July 2023
- 01:2601:26, 27 July 2023 diff hist +183 Inheritance tax Added citation on UK definition of inheritance tax from official government website. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
26 July 2023
- 04:0704:07, 26 July 2023 diff hist −20 USC School of Cinematic Arts →History: Rewrote subjective statement to be in line with encyclopedic tone. Needs citation. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:0604:06, 26 July 2023 diff hist +32 Alexander Zhurbin →Biography: Removed subjective statement and replaced with linked examples to subject's work. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:0004:00, 26 July 2023 diff hist +16 Rare Beer Club →Reception: Replaced pronoun in first sentence of section with the proper name of subject. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:0004:00, 26 July 2023 diff hist −102 Rare Beer Club →Reception: Removed introductory sentence written in a subjective style. Attributed writer of citation and cited text in review. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:4903:49, 26 July 2023 diff hist +232 Rinken Band Added formation date of band along with citation from band's official website. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
19 July 2023
- 06:4106:41, 19 July 2023 diff hist +1 Pape Diouf →Early life: Changed sentences to past tense as subject is deceased. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:3906:39, 19 July 2023 diff hist +191 Flag of Victoria (state) Added official government source as citation. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
15 July 2023
- 02:5402:54, 15 July 2023 diff hist +2 Equal Rights Advocates Changed verb for better readability. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:5202:52, 15 July 2023 diff hist −7 Isabella Bird Removed two words to fix grammatical error. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5102:51, 15 July 2023 diff hist +498 Isabella Bird →Legacy: Added information about recent event in Japan to Legacy section. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4501:45, 15 July 2023 diff hist −10 Human trafficking in Paraguay Edited addition to properly attribute public domain source, https://www.state.gov/reports/2023-trafficking-in-persons-report/paraguay/ Tag: Visual edit
12 July 2023
- 02:0402:04, 12 July 2023 diff hist −13 Space Hulk: Vengeance of the Blood Angels →Gameplay: Rewrote sentence to fix grammatical error. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 01:5101:51, 12 July 2023 diff hist −4 Start (cereal) →Advertising: Removed word to make sentence past tense as subject is no longer being sold. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
- 01:5001:50, 12 July 2023 diff hist −110 John Gaul Lebo Simplified formatting and shortened introductory paragraph to remove duplicate language. Removed oil rich claim as there was no citation and online sources for these claims appear to come entirely from local politicians advocating against said claim. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 01:4001:40, 12 July 2023 diff hist +856 Human trafficking in Paraguay Added link to United State's Department of State Wikipedia page. Rewrote sentence to attribute subjective statement to that source. Added recent information by the same source from most recent relevant report. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 01:2301:23, 12 July 2023 diff hist −278 Human trafficking in Paraguay →Prosecution: Removed subjective sentences that were both out of date and copied entirely from the cited source. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
11 July 2023
- 03:3703:37, 11 July 2023 diff hist −12 Anne Burns (linguist) →Biography: Rewrote sentence to remove formatting error and linked to related Wikipedia page. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2503:25, 11 July 2023 diff hist +53 Lili Bosse →Philanthropy: Updated link tagged as dead to latest live page. Removed promotional language. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:1203:12, 11 July 2023 diff hist −1 Florida Council of 100 →Projects: Rewrote sentence which referenced a past event to the past tense. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 02:5502:55, 11 July 2023 diff hist +277 Ainslie Henderson →Films: Added cited information about the subject's more recent work. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
10 July 2023
- 05:0405:04, 10 July 2023 diff hist +102 Suzhou River (film) Rewrote sentence to attribute cited source and changed statements to quotes from that source. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5604:56, 10 July 2023 diff hist −15 Suzhou River (film) →Plot: Rewrote sentence for readability. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5404:54, 10 July 2023 diff hist −4 Clementine (The Walking Dead) Rewrote sentence for readability. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:5004:50, 10 July 2023 diff hist −1 Jatta National Archaeological Museum Rewrote opening sentence for readability and fixed grammatical error. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4804:48, 10 July 2023 diff hist −4 m Cheque (singer) →Career: Removed unnecessary possessive. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:4104:41, 10 July 2023 diff hist −96 Stewart M. Brandborg →Career: Removed subjective statements and simplified sentences. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:3704:37, 10 July 2023 diff hist −191 Ruvo di Puglia Rewrote in an encyclopedic tone. Fixed capitalization errors and removed broken links. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
7 July 2023
- 07:2607:26, 7 July 2023 diff hist −4 m Vern Riffe →Life and political career: Updated verbs to past tense as subject is deceased. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:2407:24, 7 July 2023 diff hist −48 Patricia Maxwell Removed subjective text, non-attributable as it is not found in the cited source. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:2107:21, 7 July 2023 diff hist +196 Françoise Pascal Added citation and additional information from cited source. Fixed link text. Rewrote sentence to fit section theme. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:5406:54, 7 July 2023 diff hist +1 m Ushas Mons Sentence lacked a period. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
6 July 2023
- 07:2007:20, 6 July 2023 diff hist −4 m Feminism in South Korea Changed wording for better readability. Sub-section needs further updates to conform to encyclopedic tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
